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PostSubject: Fujinsen Arakasi W I P    Fujinsen Arakasi W I P  Icon_minitime1Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:35 pm

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Full Name: Fujisen Arakasi
Alias: the kidou demon
Age Of Appearance: 30
Real Age:about 569
Gender: Male
Current Residence: unknown

Relationship status: Single
sexuality: Straight

Squad Number:
former 4th
former 12th squad member
former: 5th squad
Organization: The Vizard corps


Personality:

Likes: Reading, inventing, reasearching.
Disslikes: false people, to fight, fish

Goals: Becoming one of the most famous inventors and scienticst in soul societies history. To be able to return to soul society and his loved one day
Fears: to lose those that he care about


Is a thinker and easy disappears in thoughts, often about Kidou technology and similar. It has made many to consider him as a social, even if he’s not. He prefers however to be alone in his house studying or working on some invention, even if he don’t have anything against to be out, he just forgets time when he starts working with something. Even when he is outside of his house he prefers to keep in the background. Listening and analyzing before acting. And you rarely notice him in a room unless he speaks. he also don’t likes to fight

In combat
The times he actually has to fight he often have the entire situations planned out well in advance. Arakasi is a very patient combatant, taking in every detail of his opponent’s strategy and abilities, and is a genius at determining an opponent’s capabilities and preferred method and when it comes to form strategies and methods to better combat a particular opponent. He’s very quick at adapting if something unforeseen would happen that would ruin his plans however it rarely does. He also never shows any sign of alarm or distress and keeps calm in the harshest and toughest situations.


Physical Appearance:

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Height: 6'2 feet
Weight: 165 lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color/Style: White.
Tattoos/scars he have tattoos on his left and right arm.
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Clothing: Appears to be wearing a black turtle neck with a white dress shirt over it the shirt has a golden rimed collar, the gold trim is also going down the front of the shirt. There are at the collar on both sides small swirls of gold that come out of it, Two brackets come down and fasten the collar together but connected to them is a blue gray string. from the string hangs a crystal that at each end is incased in gold wire to hold it in place. The sleeves of his shirt are black but seem to fade to grey the sleeves come to a black point ending just where his fingers begin. On top of each sleeve there is 2 thin sky blue belts whose fasteners are a gold color. The right sleeve appears to have a vine pattern traveling down it the meaning of this only Arakasi knows.
He is also wearing a white vest the vest has a trim sky blue in coloring and looks like it comes to for a belt of the same color. On the right side of the front there is what looks like a vine pattern.
around his waist he appears to have a purple belt part of which is braided. He carries a pair of light grey pants with boots that comes up to mid shin and are held together by black with bands of sky blue and white


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Traveling clothes
A simple white cloak hold together by buckles that’s easy to remove so the cloak wont be in the way in combat.

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A variant with a hood. Its very simple and brown unlike the other one
It will completely cover his face and body and hide his reiryoku/reitsu.
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History:

Early Years
Arakasi was born in the soul society to the name Fujisen Arakasi the second born son of a noble family, his mother died giving birth to him and his father was a harsh and strict man so Arakasi was basically raised by his older brother, Haji. Haji was born prodigy a brilliant scientist and incredible fighter he could rival a captain of the gotei 13. Haji learned his younger brother everything he knew and it was soon proved that arakasi was very intelligent and shared his brother’s interest for science, and haji even told him that he wouldn’t be surprised if he surpassed him one day. Even at that young age Arakasi excelled at Kido and Haji encouraged him.

Haji also encouraged him to train shunpo and held those lessons himself for his younger brother. Arakasi continued his studies becoming a master in shunpo and skilled with Kido far beyond his years, spending almost all day either training his shunpo or being in the library learning more about Kido or in the laboratory with his brother. Their uncle who was a shinigami did come and visit them often and told Arakasi about the shinigamis and was very proud over their development. Due to the duties he had as the captain over 5th squad he never stayed for long. For years he trained with his brother and uncle. Sadly their father died 894 years old and haji took over as the head of the family Due to being the older brother. It was around this time arakasi decided to join the shinigami academy

Academy years
At the academy the teachers immediately noticed what arakasi father and uncle had that he had a natural talent for kido. He also showed great skills when it come to shunpo he did however lack Greatly when it come to zanjutsu. arakasi spent almost all of his spare time in the libraries in soul society reading or at the mansion with his brother training and by the time he graduated he was atleast a decent zanjutsu user. He left the Academy with top grades in only two years time.

Shinigami years
he joined the 4th squad where he after being there for three years became a ranked officer due to his great kidou skill he had quickly learned how to use healing kidou. It was also shortly after he joined 4th squad he learned his zanpakotus name which further increased his powers and let him access shikai. After releasing his shikai once and nearly kill a comrade he swore to don’t use it again until he mastered it. Every day every chance he got he did go to some private place to train and to communicate with his zanpakotu spirit and mastered his shikai in a surprisingly short time. After mastering it he became a seated officer shortly after. He was in 4th squad for over two decades. Learning many healing kidous and developed a few kidou of his own, both healing and more offensive and defensive ones. After being there for so long he felt that he had emptied the possibilities that 4th could offer.

He went to the captain and asked for a transfer and for a letter of recommendation. She said she had noticed that he seemed restless and that his personality wasn’t really fitting for a healer. Using that and showing his skills as a inventor he got a place in the 12th squad. He spent many years working there. While he was a part of 12th squad he helped in creating many new inventions and did even invent some for his own personal use. Despite him being a good invention it was soon evident that his true skills lay with kidou and as such he once again transferred squad this time he transferred to the 5th squad. He quickly became a seated officer based on his earlier resumes and his vast kidou skills, Most probably thought he would get special treatment since he was the nephew to the current 5th squad captain they was wrong as the matter of fact the captain was even harder on arkasi than on the other squad members. He meditated each day to materialize his zanpakotu spirit and succeeded in achieving bankai, giving him access to even more abilities. He was promoted to lieutenant and later captain for the 5th squad when his uncle retired. After being captain for about 3 years all changed. A shinigami approached him notifying him on that his brother had died probably murdered.

His brother’s death and the aizen incident
To uphold the stability and balance he was asked to take over as the leader of the fuijinsen family. It was soon evident that he really hadn’t got the proper education on how to run a noble house but as the advisors soon noticed he was a quick learner. In only 4 months time he had learn almost everything he needed to know to rule the fujinsen clan He was also introduced to a proper fiancé for a arranged marriage that would benefit the fujinsen family a girl named Elena at first things dident work out for them but the more they meet the more they realized that they liked each other and it wasent long before they could be seen together almost wherever they did go everything was well. The affairs of the clan bloomed under his ruling he had a fiancé.

Elena and arakasi traveling to a dinner they got invited to by another noble family.
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Assasination attempt.
Everything would change when he became the target for a assassination attempt and the culprit was no other than a very old servant to the family. Arakasi survived the assassination attempt but it costed him his left eye. Elena never left his sick bed during his recovery.
Sadly the guards killed the servant before he got a chance to interrogate him but a few weeks later he found out who was behind the murder on his brother and who had convinced the servant to assassinate him and the culprit was taken care of. He also started working on a invention to replace his eye and after many hours spent in the laboratory he succeeded.

Arakasi in his lab working on the artificial eye
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Then information on the aizen incident reached him and he got back to more active shinigami duties, Leaving Elena alone for the most part something that made them both very sad. Although he never officially got appointed captain again he pretty much ruled over the squad during this incident since hinamori seemed to be to upset with aizen proving to be a traitor. Hinamori became his lieutenant once again and all seemed well. He was however not participating in the winter wars fighting against aizen due to that he had been ordered to protect Soul society just in case that azien would succeed with his plans.

We won
After everything was solved and aizen was imprisoned all seemed well. The captains responsible for aizens defeat were promoted to royal guards. Despite not having doing much Arakasi was also offered this spot but said no to it thinking of his duties as head of the fuijinsen clan. He never actually left soul society much during those years and protected soul society doing his duties as a captain. He also on his free time returned to the manor Mostly to be with Elena but also to the lab in the basement where he conducted experiments after putting up layers of barriers.

XX years after aizens defeat
At a time he had begun researching on how to give more power to the members of soul society and that was the base idea when he invented the Tensei (転生, Transmigration of Souls).

Hollowfication
Since he dident wanna experiment on any other shinigami incase something would go wrong he used it on himself . he did expect it to increase his shinigami powers to maximum, he dident expect it to start a Hollowfication process he passed out and was transferred to his inner world where he fought his hollow which to his surprise was very easy considering how similar they was he woke up finding a odd mask lying next to him. Realizing what his invention could to he sealed it away and never mentioned it to anyone he also keept his newfound vizards powers a secret. But they was discovered and a jealous squad member accused him of being a traitor and he had to leave soul society and escaped to karakura town where he set up a base hidden by kidou.


Fighting Style
Strength Kidou, speed, agility
Weakness Hakuda, Zanjutsu physically weak.
general fightning style Combining his speed with devious invention and his kidou knowledge.


Zanpakuto Information
Name: Ekisengenkai (Liquid Limit)
Zanpakuto Sealed Appearance:
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his sealed zan looks like this however no one have seen it since he implanted it in his own body something that nearly took his own life.
Zanpakuto Spirit Apperance:
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Spirit information: Arakasi and Ekisengenkai are very closely connected. In battle the two seem to be in perfect harmony, which adds to their performance in combat. They talk in Arakasi’s inner world very often, which boosts their relationship with one another. Arakasi has made the comment that, in a sense, Ekisengenkai is his closest confident and most trusted companion. She also seems to like cherry blossoms for a reason unknown to arakasi
Inner World: A a forest of cherry blossom. ( see the spirit picture)
Sealed abilities: the ability to transform solid non organic objects into liquid, and vice versa, and then shape it into something new. As a large tree can be converted to a liquid-like concise works, with the same color as the tree was the main color, probably brown, but then to shape it into a table that is in the same color. Now it's not about a tree to form a table, but what is left over can be formed into a tree again, which is a lot smaller than it was before, or formed into something else. So this Ability is primarily used for small craft. To shape the small details are obviously much longer, and is as ordinary artisans, one pill a job with many hours of work, though it is of course a bit faster for those with this ability than for ordinary workers, and that they can "rub" out an error and try again, without having to redo the whole product. They can also control how hard / soft material is to be, for example they can form a bowl out of water that as hard as steel but still looks like water.

Disadvantages of Ekisengenkai:
* In case of contact with others who do not have that blood line, then the other one without the blood line, enormous pain, not lethal, but painful.


Shikai
Name: Ichimaiue Ekisengenkai (Higher Liquid Limit)
Release Phrase: Shikai
Shikai Appearance: A very complicated tattoo patter that Covers his back and wraps around his shoulders and arms seemingly to merge with the other tattoo on his arms, as well as his thighs. It also wraps itself to his sides and just barely onto his abdomen, it continues down to his knees. This tattoo takes on a Silvery crimson color.
Shikai Overall Ability:
The second step is as the name says, more and simply better. It's faster and easier to transform and shape than those at the first step. But now it is also possible to partially convert the organic stuff, like humans and animals. Transforming a different creature is extremely painful, because the process is very slow and may take several hours, even if it does, otherwise the creature is exposed to enormous and horrible pain that can lead to death. It is the amount of Reiryoku The one u use this ability on is a big factor to if this ability work if they have a huge amount of reiryoku it is harder for him to use it on them and if they are severly higher reiryoku level than him like the CC its almost impossible for him to use this ability on them. Although it is a painful process, this ability can be used in medical purpose, He can take a dead pig (which has a very similar set of humans) or a dead person, to reshape a new arm or leg, maybe a heart , and then "melt" together the new part with the patient, who will experience several minutes of pain, then the new part is adapting to the body. Of course it does not always work., since the body does not always accept the new organ, if it doesent then you can just try again with a new part.

Disadvantages of Ichimaiue Ekisengenkai:
* The pain that is formed in contact with skin is much worse,. The pain can even kill others, if the contact is held long enough and that the creature experiencing pain is not the strongest.
* If a people posess high speed regeneration its even harder for him to liquify them


Bankai
Bankai Name: Kyuukyou Ekisengenkai (Final / Liquid Limit)
Bankai Appearance: same complex pattern as in shikai.
Bankai Overall Ability:
By this stage, you get the ability to easily convert organic beings, even if the amount of Reiryoku they have is a little higher than The users, only they with extreme reiryoku sources can not be converted (at least not easy). To create new creatures and people from the "fluid" of living beings is possible, but takes a lot of reiryoku. But over time, you can create a small army of golems, who blindly reads the Creator, and who has the same abilities as the person / creature that was transformed ((OBSERVE the transformed one does not get zanpakotu or doll abilities)), and the creator may also involve material things to create monstrous golems, they can for example involve steel, so they become stronger and can withstand more, maybe blood from another person/creature for more abilities. (to be noted that if he for example transfrom soifon and then adds metal into her to make her more durable it would severly effect her shunpo so to add new things to them can have side effects)) To transform itself to change shape, create a new body part of another material, substitute a new body, is easy for the "creator".

Disadvantages of Kyuukyou Ekisengenkai:
* The pain that is formed by skin contact is fatal,
* Blood is completely black, causing the veins to be visible through the skin. The blood is also thicker,. One thing is that it is very difficult to bleed to death, and that blood is highly toxic.
* If a people posess high speed regeneration its a little harder for him to liquify them not as hard as in shikai though.


Mask Information
Name: myou Arakasi (dark arakasi)
We all have a dark side the question is do we control it or does it control us
Hollow Mask Appearance:
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hollow Manifestation:
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Unique Ability: when using his mask he can liquify reiryoku/reitsu (reishi overall) he can then eat/drink said reishi to restore his own.
Non unique abilities:
Cero: Like all vizards Arakasi can charge and fire a cero. He gathers energy in a horizontal line at his fist fingertip the hole in his mask where his mouth or eye should have been, or simply the tip of his sword. He then releases a purple Cero with an extremely wide arc and devastating power. He can fire this in two ways, one being the wide arc and the other being a purple orb. This can he also keep in his hand and slam into his opponent however this would hurt him to but since the blast is directed away from him not as much as his opponent.

He also have a unique variation of cero, that is very closly connected to his zanpakotu abilities. it will liquify what it hit.
upon being fired and hit something it explodes and liquify the area within the blast radiues. This variant of cero he rarley uses since it does not make a diffrence between friend and foe

Power Augmentation: Like for every other shingami that have undergone hollowfication. While wearing the mask, Arakasi’s Hollow powers supplement his Shinigami powers, giving him a vast increase in strength, speed and reitsu/reiryoku. The explanation for this is that since Hollows boost their natural abilities by obtaining spiritual power around them, either by absorbing it in its ambient form or devouring it directly from another living being, Arakasi attains power from two separate sources: that from himself (drawn using his Shinigami powers), and that from his immediate environment (drawn with the help of his Hollow powers), allowing him to draw power from both sides. There is also times where he will only draw from his hollow side if he ends up in a situation where his shinigami powers are suppressed for example or if his inner hollow manage to take over. Or something seals off his shinigami powers. Of course the opposite can also happen

He have subdued his inner hollow and is in such control and harmony that he have gained a resureccion:

Resureccion apperance: His resureccion does funny enough not look anything like his inner hollow or his mask, instead its a formless shape of reiryoku so to say and since he draws reishi from all around him and can liquify it this makes him a very hard being to kill. He does however have to solidify to be able to use kidou.
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Other: Some info bout the staff he is wearing
a kyōtei is an extremely rare form of weaponry that is commonly made into the form of a monk staff, but can be made to look more exotic should the recipient wish for it to appear as such: the kyōtei are one of the few known spiritual weaponry which expands on the weilders own spiritual energy so as to allow them to cast more powerful spells and use more advanced techniques without it affecting their wellfare, Arakasi's kyōtei is known to be especially powerful as it is described to have almost the same level of spiritual energy that he himself does - making him capable of fighting against much more powerful opponents and bypass his normal weaknesses


~RP sample~
ha a perfect night for hunting at this late hour it was usually only homeless people that was out. Sure normal humans hadent much power he could take but sometimes they could suprise there was suprisingly many that had slumbering powers, and then of course it was the hollows this town seemed to be filled to the brim with them one of the reasons why he had opened up his store here by feeding on hollows he had manage to keep his existance a secret so far snd he intented to do so still. A howl was heard not so far from where he had made his apperance a hollow right on time and judging by the spiritual power a little more powerful one tol Looking around to make sure no one did see him he opened a hole in the ground and dissipeard.

To reappear just a few meters from the hollow. oh it wasent one hollow it was several allthough most of them was just low life. purple spheres appeard around him and flied towards the weaker hollows incinirating them. That got the stronger hollows attention. and it howled at Arakasi who just stood there calmly As it charged towards Arakasi it seemed like he dissipeard just to reapear on the hollows back and said calmly
"you seems to be a strong one but you aint very smart are you"
he stabbed his cane through its neck beginning to absorb its power. when the hollow was gone he simply landed on the ground looking around again to make sure no one had seen him before continuing to stroll through the park just like a normal human would do


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PostSubject: Re: Fujinsen Arakasi W I P    Fujinsen Arakasi W I P  Icon_minitime1Mon Jun 13, 2011 9:10 pm

~Other Techniques~
I use the system beginner intermediate and advanced meaning advanced is the highest talent level.
I also color the personal info bout the diffrent types in description red
the personal techniques he developed are in green text.

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PostSubject: Re: Fujinsen Arakasi W I P    Fujinsen Arakasi W I P  Icon_minitime1Mon Jun 13, 2011 9:21 pm

Custom Kido Application


Unique Kidō
During his time in the Fourth Division, Arakasi worked on and completed several unique Kidō which he began using for healing purposes. As his life went on, he developed several other kidō techniques both offensive and defensive. He has proven himself highly capable of using them at their full potential. One of his hobbies is to think up and even create new and powerful kidō, though he often makes them in preparation for certain fights.

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Arakasi’s mastery of Kidō is not only general. Arakasi have been able to master five spells completely, and as such he's been able to device powerful variations to them - in addition to their power being increased immensely respectively. The spells are listed in perfect order.
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PostSubject: Re: Fujinsen Arakasi W I P    Fujinsen Arakasi W I P  Icon_minitime1Tue Jun 14, 2011 6:56 pm

Before this app is graded officially. A couple things I'd like to say about the kido, since I run the show on that around here XD

Chibara no Tate is a no. Just flat out. That kido isn't going to be acceptable. Blocking hado up to 96 with little to no damage appearing? >Nope.avi

I see the word "chakra" used in the description for Seishouken, change that please. This is not naruto rp.

Amatsu Gyakuten is another no. Just.. no.

Some kido don't have Categories, and a lot of them don't have incantations. Fix this for all of them and add what number kido it is. I know it's custom, but it still has to be numbered.

I'm going to let someone else grade the seals, that's not my expertise, and it confuses me.

On a final note from me, that kido-enhanced storage pack seems completely implausible, maybe I'm wrong though, this is bleach after all.
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PostSubject: Re: Fujinsen Arakasi W I P    Fujinsen Arakasi W I P  Icon_minitime1Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:14 pm


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